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RE: Poems of Moon - DrakeDamage - 07.11.2016
Butterfly
Dark skies clouded my mind
making me deaf, making me blind
All those pretty smiles
were lies, just a few more lies
I could not trust, i could not believe
locked myself in, in fear and grief
hatred and sadness filling my heart
my empty void with no beginning or end
Just me, myself and I in the dark
no hapiness, no loveful spark
Just broken dreams
and tearful river streams
Until that day, the day i met you
my primrose mare all i say is true
You filled my void and you fix my broken life clock
You cured my pain and took down that crushing-my-heart rock
I was lost in darkness but now, thanks to you i see
I said things i did not mean and you trusted me
i tried to run away and hide but you stopped me
i wanted to cry and fall to my knees but you smiled at me
You warmed up that frozen fire in me
You showed me what could one day be
No matter how many times i failed
You helped me back up when i felt
I could look into your eyes for days and nights
Those cyan stars my heart's lighthouse lights
Your voice a nature's soothing melody
warming my heart like a soft fur your body
You might not speak up much
you like to stay outside a lot
you could never leave your friends behind
I'm glad, after all, you're one of a kind
making me deaf, making me blind
All those pretty smiles
were lies, just a few more lies
I could not trust, i could not believe
locked myself in, in fear and grief
hatred and sadness filling my heart
my empty void with no beginning or end
Just me, myself and I in the dark
no hapiness, no loveful spark
Just broken dreams
and tearful river streams
Until that day, the day i met you
my primrose mare all i say is true
You filled my void and you fix my broken life clock
You cured my pain and took down that crushing-my-heart rock
I was lost in darkness but now, thanks to you i see
I said things i did not mean and you trusted me
i tried to run away and hide but you stopped me
i wanted to cry and fall to my knees but you smiled at me
You warmed up that frozen fire in me
You showed me what could one day be
No matter how many times i failed
You helped me back up when i felt
I could look into your eyes for days and nights
Those cyan stars my heart's lighthouse lights
Your voice a nature's soothing melody
warming my heart like a soft fur your body
You might not speak up much
you like to stay outside a lot
you could never leave your friends behind
I'm glad, after all, you're one of a kind
RE: Poems of Moon - Rwakk - 14.11.2016
Ta poslední báseň je velice emotivní. Pořád lituji že má angličtina prostě není dobrá a nedokážu si ji vychutnat v plném znění, ale pochopil jsem smysl slov.
RE: Poems of Moon - DrakeDamage - 26.12.2016
Čas radosti
Mysl je temná se svíčkou ve středu
oheň plápolá, pod ním taje srdce z ledu
úsměv falešný v pravý se mění,
ráda mám noc a o Luně snění.
Vidím paprsky měsíčné a první vločky sněhu
V objetí hřevivém cítím lásky něhu.
Beze strachu a s klidem v duši
objímám plnou emocí sněho-bílou růži.
Vzpomínám na časy, kdy sama jsem byla
a věřila, že tak by jsem žíti chtěla.
Jak naivní srdce mladé, když nevidí budoucna jas
Přes černý závoj nevnímá letitý stříbrný vlas.
Neztrácej úsměv a nech své srdce láskou plát
radost ať ti duši naplní, pak není čeho se bát.
Paprsky stříbrné z měsíčního svitu
první a poslední z prvotního citu.
V bílé místnosti na stole malý stromek sedí
kolem jsou ozdoby a na vrchu usazeno jmelí
v ozdobách vánoce minulé lze zřít
jen lehký pohled do vzpomínek tě může vzít
Jmelí s červenou mašlí a zvonkem po straně
místnost naplní vůni, ač je sotva do dlaně
připomínka, že vánoční čas je pořád kolem nás
a ač občas jsou časy temné, jsem ráda že mám vás
Bronies já znám a jsem ráda že tak
poník jako symbol, ten přátelství znak.
Nový rok příjde s novou serie, už se těším co tam najdem
tak doufám, že máte hezké vánoce a štastný nový rok vám všem.
RE: Poems of Moon - Alexie - 27.12.2016
Líbí se mi tvoje vyjadřovaní, jen tak dál. Ta poslední sloka mi tam ovšem nesedí, působí tak trochu jako část jiné básně.
Znám to z mojí vlastní tvorby - máš nějaké schéma, držíš se ho, chceš báseň určitým způsobem zakončit. Ke konci už ovšem jde hůře najít vhodná slova a nepůsobí to vzhledem k celku dobře. Zkus si to co znovu přečíst s odpočatou hlavou, psaní zdar
RE: Poems of Moon - DrakeDamage - 14.03.2017
Two sides of harmony
For days that long gone past
i wish from depth of my heart
to one day see you like a different spark
spark of peace and hope in my new life
once i feared this light
like a shadow hiding, shunning away
every little piece of you
i could not take the truth
how rotten my soul in those times
those days full of hate
would you believe if i told you now
i might have felt the same way
i used to enjoy the lack of light
and the fear i struck in others
setting their heart ablaze with fright
how long could the journey from darkness of the past
take me and how long will it last?
why you~ do i have to ask?
Once i would run, i would flee
rather then close, far away i wished to be
I was not scared, nor frithened
or petrified...well not at that time
I didn't run from you or your light
nor warmth, but from me, you see?
was i lost? maybe a bit
on the edge of me i stood ready to jump
my mind going blank, my body feeling numb
just one step to fall, just one and only throught
but then i heard a voice, voice and kind words
Long burried and forgotten, and forbitten
by me due to longing, thus going insane
but how precious they are, how wonderful they sound
and how they wash away my pain
maybe i am lost and maybe i just used to be
long gone i was, maybe stone or tree, but not free
i used dismiss what was true and real
and what i through wasn't important to me
Once i would run, i would flee
once i would silence your voice i could hear
once i could not stand that sound, making me care about
but now i can't go on without
RE: Poems of Moon - DrakeDamage - 04.05.2017
Valley of sun
Darkness, Darkness and whispers
nightmare slithers
and then by light shooed away
thank you sister once again
i open my eyes feeling the time is near
time for sun to rise and wake my dear
they still don't see me that way
...i'm afraid
i walk among them each day and still can feel the fear
perfect i've been called so, so many times
i wish they could see me as i stand
not a princess but a pony as they are
oh sister tell me how
but a day went by
and you're seen more free than me
a day surpasses centuries it seems
i once asked my twilight dear
question about me with answer clear
what am i to you as a pony is to a pony
you're my mentor, friend and princess
but not just me, to everypony
friend. as beautiful as that word may be
it's rarely aimed at me
i'd like to think that's how see me many
but i know it's hardly any
nightmare slithers
and then by light shooed away
thank you sister once again
i open my eyes feeling the time is near
time for sun to rise and wake my dear
they still don't see me that way
...i'm afraid
i walk among them each day and still can feel the fear
perfect i've been called so, so many times
i wish they could see me as i stand
not a princess but a pony as they are
oh sister tell me how
but a day went by
and you're seen more free than me
a day surpasses centuries it seems
i once asked my twilight dear
question about me with answer clear
what am i to you as a pony is to a pony
you're my mentor, friend and princess
but not just me, to everypony
friend. as beautiful as that word may be
it's rarely aimed at me
i'd like to think that's how see me many
but i know it's hardly any
Lack of light
Sometimes in darkness i sit in my room
looking through the window at the moon
thin rays of light sparkling my eye
making me light making me fly
dream arrived and i fell in
time for our tango to begin
we dance this dance each and every night
through plains of imaginations
until the first beam of light
Which tears away you and me
not listening to my words of plea
i watch it all crumble down to nothingness
i want to stop it but won't nonetheless
morning sun makes it all fade away
and thus night ends and here begins the day
and once again tired like flower withered
missing that dark embrace i shivered
not cold but lone
not scared but left
cycle repeats but i'm out of breath
damn you i cry and shout
breathing-heaving aloud
you bright shinning star
why must you ruin my time
i wish just to be gone
of you i'm not fond
tears rolling down, my eyes heavy
no air in my lungs i shouted plenty
curses said and meant fully
knees weak, i loathe you trully
tired so tired no words left
too tired to walk fall back to bed
dream with no rest vision turns black
maybe if i lie here it'll come back
looking through the window at the moon
thin rays of light sparkling my eye
making me light making me fly
dream arrived and i fell in
time for our tango to begin
we dance this dance each and every night
through plains of imaginations
until the first beam of light
Which tears away you and me
not listening to my words of plea
i watch it all crumble down to nothingness
i want to stop it but won't nonetheless
morning sun makes it all fade away
and thus night ends and here begins the day
and once again tired like flower withered
missing that dark embrace i shivered
not cold but lone
not scared but left
cycle repeats but i'm out of breath
damn you i cry and shout
breathing-heaving aloud
you bright shinning star
why must you ruin my time
i wish just to be gone
of you i'm not fond
tears rolling down, my eyes heavy
no air in my lungs i shouted plenty
curses said and meant fully
knees weak, i loathe you trully
tired so tired no words left
too tired to walk fall back to bed
dream with no rest vision turns black
maybe if i lie here it'll come back
Unforgiven
when the sky is falling down
i will show you how
it goes all around
destiny unbound
can't you see the stars dying down
the light vanishing from within of your heart
replaced by nothing and nothing you shall be
and im sorry to tell ya, thats all you'll ever see
life behind the bars
bars of your mind
starved and chained to the ground
that pain you can't live without
the pain you caused
the tears others shed
while void took place in your eyes
and you will rot where sun will never rise
and no regret in your heart
darker than night each and every part
your body decaying in garden lost long ago
thus be trapped in the garden of your soul
i will show you how
it goes all around
destiny unbound
can't you see the stars dying down
the light vanishing from within of your heart
replaced by nothing and nothing you shall be
and im sorry to tell ya, thats all you'll ever see
life behind the bars
bars of your mind
starved and chained to the ground
that pain you can't live without
the pain you caused
the tears others shed
while void took place in your eyes
and you will rot where sun will never rise
and no regret in your heart
darker than night each and every part
your body decaying in garden lost long ago
thus be trapped in the garden of your soul
RE: Poems of Moon - DrakeDamage - 19.07.2017
guardian
Above the abyss stars fly by,
there stands a princess of the night
Each star a dream or a memory,
some empty, some like a symphony
She watches, she guards
trying her best to keep everypony at ease
letting them rest and enjoy their dreams
One twinkling star shows a little filly earning her cutie mark
while another projects a blue pegasus fighting off the dark
one looks empty, but is filled with determination
another shows royal cake addiction
every twinkle, every little dream, hope or memory
together they resonate night dreamer's melody
circling around mare in dark blue
swaying her hooves reaching through
extending her help, her mind
every night, just to find
every dreamer, every troubled soul
banishing night terrors in mighty blows
long since dawn to sun's rising
with pride enterprising
taking care of ponies during their rest
without fear, always trying her best
RE: Poems of Moon - DrakeDamage - 19.08.2017
Star's lament
I watch as day turns to night
reddish aura surrounding the sky
takes on dark blue coat
and moon takes first step on dreamer's road
followed by little sparks of light
then i watch little water drops
falling in between those shinning glimmers
reflecting the rainbow of the nightfall
while hiding our guarding shadow
answering her call
Charging to fight a nighmare
of somepony on the other side of town
I wave but doubt she'll see
through the courtain of dark
and window of the tree
This tree a library of me
and other bearers of harmony
build as a memory
of treasured past
and those who may not last
Those who shall not be forgotten in lines of time
Taking care of remembrance
Tis a task of mine
Not bound by mortality
Torn by serenity of everlasting life
reddish aura surrounding the sky
takes on dark blue coat
and moon takes first step on dreamer's road
followed by little sparks of light
then i watch little water drops
falling in between those shinning glimmers
reflecting the rainbow of the nightfall
while hiding our guarding shadow
answering her call
Charging to fight a nighmare
of somepony on the other side of town
I wave but doubt she'll see
through the courtain of dark
and window of the tree
This tree a library of me
and other bearers of harmony
build as a memory
of treasured past
and those who may not last
Those who shall not be forgotten in lines of time
Taking care of remembrance
Tis a task of mine
Not bound by mortality
Torn by serenity of everlasting life
Flower
One late summer afternoon
in the meadow of everfree
a pure white flower rose
from the green
Next to poison ivy
under cap of thorns
Sits there unharmed
and sun she adores
Like a mirror
reflecting the light and peace
making space
for other growing seeds
There blooms purple,
orange and blue
There yellow, pink
and marshmallow have their due
Like a rainbow connection
from flower to flower
Spreading the light
of immense power
Like a love
or friendship it seems
So warmly now
the meadow beams
in the meadow of everfree
a pure white flower rose
from the green
Next to poison ivy
under cap of thorns
Sits there unharmed
and sun she adores
Like a mirror
reflecting the light and peace
making space
for other growing seeds
There blooms purple,
orange and blue
There yellow, pink
and marshmallow have their due
Like a rainbow connection
from flower to flower
Spreading the light
of immense power
Like a love
or friendship it seems
So warmly now
the meadow beams
Heart below the moon
On top of a hill above ponyville
you may find me
watching stars, soaked by the rain
with a huge grin on my face
Why would you go there this day
why not wait
at least take an umbrella i say
and wipe that smile off your face
did i ever tell you how much i love your smile
how much it means to me
how it warms my heart
like an embrace i wish would never end
You tell me every morning
and evening too
sometimes i wonder
if that's all you do
and if i do?
what if i praise the moon
and the sun and the skies above us
for such a chance in my life
Maybe i pray on the mountains
and alongside the rivers
what if i dance with the wind
on the music of flowing water
what if your voice is a melody
for a rose of love
and your laugh a symphony
more beautiful than a thousand stars
What if i joined you up there
i wouldn't mind a bit
was that all true
What if i showed you...
you may find me
watching stars, soaked by the rain
with a huge grin on my face
Why would you go there this day
why not wait
at least take an umbrella i say
and wipe that smile off your face
did i ever tell you how much i love your smile
how much it means to me
how it warms my heart
like an embrace i wish would never end
You tell me every morning
and evening too
sometimes i wonder
if that's all you do
and if i do?
what if i praise the moon
and the sun and the skies above us
for such a chance in my life
Maybe i pray on the mountains
and alongside the rivers
what if i dance with the wind
on the music of flowing water
what if your voice is a melody
for a rose of love
and your laugh a symphony
more beautiful than a thousand stars
What if i joined you up there
i wouldn't mind a bit
was that all true
What if i showed you...
RE: Poems of Moon - DrakeDamage - 25.10.2017
Není to zrovna báseň, ale po určité výzvě jsem přepsala jednu Píseň do více MLP podoby a jsem s ní docela spokojená, tak proč ji nedat sem
Severní
Jdu s podkovou zlatou,
pro lásku mou svatou,
Ač prší či mrzne, nocí i dnem.
Hlava mě pálí
a v modravé dáli
tam vidím tu, co bloumá mi snem.
Kraj pod sněhem mlčí,
tam stopy jsou mantikóří,
tam zbytečně budeš mi psát.
Sama v dřevěné stodůlce
sen o fialové kobylce
já nechám si tisíckrát zdát.
severní vítr je krutý
Počítej Twily má s tím
ke kopýtkům ti dám srdce z duhy
a na křídlech lásky s tebou odletím
ke kopýtkům ti dám srdce z duhy
a na křídlech lásky s tebou odletím
Tak zarůstám srstí
v úkrytu z listí
čas se mi krátí víc a víc.
Už je to dávno,
co v brzké ráno,
já hladila tvoji líc.
Tu blázen teď sedí
ke hvězdám hledí
a hledá tvou krásnou tvář.
Srdce na dlani
čeká na stráni
na úsměv jak polární zář.
severní vítr je krutý
Počítej Twily má s tím
ke kopýtkům ti dám srdce z duhy
a na křídlech lásky s tebou odletím
ke kopýtkům ti dám srdce z duhy
a na křídlech lásky s tebou odletím
pro lásku mou svatou,
Ač prší či mrzne, nocí i dnem.
Hlava mě pálí
a v modravé dáli
tam vidím tu, co bloumá mi snem.
Kraj pod sněhem mlčí,
tam stopy jsou mantikóří,
tam zbytečně budeš mi psát.
Sama v dřevěné stodůlce
sen o fialové kobylce
já nechám si tisíckrát zdát.
severní vítr je krutý
Počítej Twily má s tím
ke kopýtkům ti dám srdce z duhy
a na křídlech lásky s tebou odletím
ke kopýtkům ti dám srdce z duhy
a na křídlech lásky s tebou odletím
Tak zarůstám srstí
v úkrytu z listí
čas se mi krátí víc a víc.
Už je to dávno,
co v brzké ráno,
já hladila tvoji líc.
Tu blázen teď sedí
ke hvězdám hledí
a hledá tvou krásnou tvář.
Srdce na dlani
čeká na stráni
na úsměv jak polární zář.
severní vítr je krutý
Počítej Twily má s tím
ke kopýtkům ti dám srdce z duhy
a na křídlech lásky s tebou odletím
ke kopýtkům ti dám srdce z duhy
a na křídlech lásky s tebou odletím
V né příliš dlouhé době bych sem měla přidat i báseň o Applejack, teda jen co se rozhodnu jak ji chci napsat
RE: Poems of Moon - DrakeDamage - 26.10.2017
Apple tree
Do you see in the distance
the castle on mountain top
That a city of unicorns
named Canterlot
Now there, right below
You see, be wary
A little village
seems so ordinary
But if you were to take a hike
by the dusty road, where the river flows
you'd find a place none is like
that everypony knows
Behind the trees
red roof under sunlight beams
and in the middle of a farm
stands a pony of apple charm
With trusty Stetson on her golden mane
Working, caring through wind or rain
Family comes first you can hear her say
nopony is alone that's the Apple way
With smile like ripest apple you have ever seen
And eyes like meadow of emerald sheen
truly lost i have only been
in those eyes so serene
There is more than eye can see
all you have to do is follow me
behind the barn through garden with celery
leads a path on hill holding a dear memory
There stands a tree that had seen it all
and i'm sure it will see even more
But what it sees now, warms my heart
new chapter of apple love is about to start
When you look left and she looks right
eye meets an eye, ignites a spark
and orchard below goes silent for a moment or three
two hearts become one under branches of Apple tree
the castle on mountain top
That a city of unicorns
named Canterlot
Now there, right below
You see, be wary
A little village
seems so ordinary
But if you were to take a hike
by the dusty road, where the river flows
you'd find a place none is like
that everypony knows
Behind the trees
red roof under sunlight beams
and in the middle of a farm
stands a pony of apple charm
With trusty Stetson on her golden mane
Working, caring through wind or rain
Family comes first you can hear her say
nopony is alone that's the Apple way
With smile like ripest apple you have ever seen
And eyes like meadow of emerald sheen
truly lost i have only been
in those eyes so serene
There is more than eye can see
all you have to do is follow me
behind the barn through garden with celery
leads a path on hill holding a dear memory
There stands a tree that had seen it all
and i'm sure it will see even more
But what it sees now, warms my heart
new chapter of apple love is about to start
When you look left and she looks right
eye meets an eye, ignites a spark
and orchard below goes silent for a moment or three
two hearts become one under branches of Apple tree