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#1
Kdysi davno jsem mel vlakno, no ale to uz je archivovane, tak zakladam nove.
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Tady je neco kratkeho, co jsem pred tydnem napsal (snad tam neni moc chyb, mozna carky za citacemi by tam nemely byt, ale I don't care):

Citace:Twilight Sparkle sighed. It was well after midnight, yet she could't fall asleep, so she was reading a book. But she wasn't exactly in the mood for reading - she wanted to do something else. But what should it be?

She certainly didn't want to wake up Spike, and there wasn't much to do in the library other than reading or organizing books. With soft hoofsteps, she went out of the library and looked around. Of course she saw nopony, and she was glad for it - Twilight wanted to be alone now.

Because the Moon was shining, she saw the whole scenery in its dim light and didn't have to use her magic to light the way. The unicorn didn't have anything particular to do in mind, so she decided to go to her favourite place for thinking, on a hill near Ponyville. It was her secret spot, not even her closest friends knew about it.

There she sat and looked Ponyville-ward. It was summer and the night was full of fragrant scents, remnants of the sunny yesterday. The stars were twinkling and a chilly night breeze gently played with Twilight's mane. Below the hill lay Ponyville, her home, faintly illuminated by the Moon and thousands of tiny light dots.

She recalled what she has experienced here. Her friends... Before she came to Ponyville, her only real friend had been Shining Armor. Her arrival to this placid town turned her life upside down. She understood true friendship, discovered that she is a bearer of the Element of Magic, went through thin and thick with her friends and defeated Equestria-threatening foes every time with the magical bond she'd made with her best friends.

"May I join you?", a voice inquired.

Twilight Sparkle startle jumped. "Aaaaaaah!" Then she turned and to her great surprise saw Princess Luna. "Wha-what are you doing here, princess, shouldn't you be overseeing your subjects' dreams? I nearly got a heart attack!", Twilight said, still startled. Luna smiled: "You don't suppose that I never have a night off, do you? This is one of those nights."

"But how did you know I would be here? In all due respect, princess, you are creepy sometimes."

"I didn't. It is but a coincidence that we two meet here this night. But I am very glad we did, it is always pleasure to see somepony else appreciating my work. It must be said that there were are as few night-loving ponies now as back then when I... had troubles with myself. I reassure you, I am fine these days. I now understand that most ponies must sleep at night, I can't blame them."

"I... I don't know if I can or if it is proper thing to do, but I would like to ask you: What the Moon is like?", Twilight hesitantly asked. "You know, for science. I have meant to ask you this for a long time."

"It is a sad and dead place. A place quite unlike this world of ours. Only shadows live there. When I was Nightmare Moon, I used to look here and felt only anger and the need to put out its light. When I recollect that image now, I feel only the need to protect this world, for it is so vulnerable."
They sat in silence for a while. Occasionally, a shooting star briefly flashed through the dark sky or a bat passed by in its pursue of prey. Twilight thought about the sky a lot. Is there somebody in that dark, pondering the same question?

"Hey, Luna, do you think there are extraequestrials?", asked Twilight.

"I do not know. But if I had to choose, I would say so. We came to understand that those points of light, the stars, are all really just like our own sun, but very far away. And we made observations and estimated that there must be billions and billions of them. That puts things in perspective for me - I can't fathom there are no other beings up there."

Twilight frowned. "But you and your sister can move the Sun and the Moon - you two are like deities of our world, responsible for both sunset and dawn of this planet. You ought to know more."

Luna faintly smiled. "Neither I nor my sister are goddesses. We are but two ponies, born with untold magical potential. But you know best, Twilight, that magic isn't really something unnatural in this world. You know how magic works and how much research have been done on that subject. I can alter the position of the Moon, but I have no abilities to know whether other life exists anywhere else.

"I suppose you're right. This one and other worlds are so rich in mystery... Oh Luna, there is so much to know and our lives are so short!", Twilight cried out. "It will one day be all lost... forever." She began to cry silently, letting out almost inaudible whimpers, trembling.

Luna watched her in silence, and then sat next to her and covered the sad alicorn with her majestic wing until that purple pony calmed down and leaned onto her.

And they were sitting there, watching the sky, the spectacle of forever.
[19.2.2012 20:06:21] : Jsem dneska zkouknul první epizodu My Little Pony: FiM
[19.2.2012 20:06:53] : Fluttershy je best

OC přepracováno od bloodorangepancakes
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#2
Nebylo by to lepší hodit na Google Docs nebo jiné médium? Takhle přímo na fóru se to blbě čte Twilightsmile

Keranis' Translation Trance - Moje překlady fanficů
Broníci a jejich charakteristika - Vědecký výzkum!
KAPUT - Tady kecám.
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#3
Meh, nechci se patlat s dalsi sluzbou, kterou zridka vyuziji.
[19.2.2012 20:06:21] : Jsem dneska zkouknul první epizodu My Little Pony: FiM
[19.2.2012 20:06:53] : Fluttershy je best

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#4
Pak se ale nediv, že to moc lidí nebude číst i v tom málu co čtou.
Let it Go...Try everything.
How Far I'll Go, on top of the world?
Towards of sun immortals.
When Can I See You Again?
Top of the world.
Telling the world. To the sky!
Just a Dream. Brothers under the Sun
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#5
GDocs jsou jednoduché. Nemusíš nic zařizovat - pokud máš google účet pak je můžeš automaticky používat Pinkiesmile
Samotná povídka je super - je napsaná hodně dobrou angličtinou, takže mě při čtení nic nerušilo, je trochu hloubavá (ani moc ani málo, prostě tak akorát) a číst jí je vážně příjemné Pinkiesmile

Určitě piš víc! Ajsmug
První Equestrijský Drakobijcobijec
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