23.01.2014, 23:04
(Tento příspěvek byl naposledy změněn: 29.04.2014, 18:21 uživatelem Faelivan. Edited 20 times in total.)
Už mě přestalo bavit psát furt výhradně smutné, tak jsem si řekl, že zkusím i nějaké povzbudivé. Většinou budou stále temné, ale třeba i s něčím pěkným na konci 
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Dostal jsem radu ať založím vlákno pro svoje básničky. Tak tady je
Love (novinka)
První romantická básnička, kterou jsem kdy napsal. Je to příjemná změna.
Friends
Crystal
Wrath
Night
Eyes
Tato básnička je v podstatě backstory mýho OC, při čemž on je zde brony a ne poník.
Forest (upraveno)
Speed
U této básničky jsem se zatím ještě nesnažil mít stejný počet slabik ve verších, ale snad to příliš nevadí
Shadow´s Joy
Twilight and Sombra
Chrysalis´s Fall
Postupně sem budu přidávat další básničky
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Dostal jsem radu ať založím vlákno pro svoje básničky. Tak tady je
Love (novinka)
První romantická básnička, kterou jsem kdy napsal. Je to příjemná změna.
I am trapped like a whelp,
while you need my help.
I can´t hear the music.
Fear. I must face it!
My dear, I will never leave you,
when I needed it, you helped me too.
You were my proud protector,
you want to be him forever.
Now, for you, I will fight,
so nopony forgets the light
Our light is love,
even when it´s tought.
Love can cause so much pain,
about which, hatred can only dream.
That pain forces us to stand,
and to protect, power can lend.
Queen Chrysalis doesn´t understand,
how did our life together went.
Magic of love is true,
and she will see the prove.
I have just enough,
caged like a dove!
I have help of my friend,
it might not be too late.
We are leaving this dark place,
seeing it makes bitter my taste.
We will save you Shining,
there will be happy ending.
while you need my help.
I can´t hear the music.
Fear. I must face it!
My dear, I will never leave you,
when I needed it, you helped me too.
You were my proud protector,
you want to be him forever.
Now, for you, I will fight,
so nopony forgets the light
Our light is love,
even when it´s tought.
Love can cause so much pain,
about which, hatred can only dream.
That pain forces us to stand,
and to protect, power can lend.
Queen Chrysalis doesn´t understand,
how did our life together went.
Magic of love is true,
and she will see the prove.
I have just enough,
caged like a dove!
I have help of my friend,
it might not be too late.
We are leaving this dark place,
seeing it makes bitter my taste.
We will save you Shining,
there will be happy ending.
Friends
My friend fights over there,
his cold hatred burns air.
Calm I believe in his win,
darkness means nothing to him.
One could not understand,
why together we stand.
In fight, hopeful light of joy I use,
while my friend, with shadows did fuse.
From them, the light saves us all,
and truth into a grave did fall.
Fear from dark never vanished,
and one friend by it was banished.
Shadows are weak in the dark,
to exist they need a light.
Only when the sun shines,
the shadows are sharp like ice.
I´ve been mistaken, now I know,
I have to go save him now.
My friend can´t win alone,
in dark, evil is at home.
By your side I will fight,
even if to protest you´d tried.
Light and shadow together are,
the evil will not escape far.
his cold hatred burns air.
Calm I believe in his win,
darkness means nothing to him.
One could not understand,
why together we stand.
In fight, hopeful light of joy I use,
while my friend, with shadows did fuse.
From them, the light saves us all,
and truth into a grave did fall.
Fear from dark never vanished,
and one friend by it was banished.
Shadows are weak in the dark,
to exist they need a light.
Only when the sun shines,
the shadows are sharp like ice.
I´ve been mistaken, now I know,
I have to go save him now.
My friend can´t win alone,
in dark, evil is at home.
By your side I will fight,
even if to protest you´d tried.
Light and shadow together are,
the evil will not escape far.
Crystal
In Canterlot I stand,
my skills I had to lend.
From deep ice he came back,
the power, I alone lack.
I am counting on my student,
let´s hope, it isn´t too sudden.
His power became great,
and caused our love to fade.
Together we fought,
and together we hoped.
Pure crystal and sun´s flames,
things, which evil hates.
I became princess and he king,
his subjects, he was loving.
With changelings came danger,
his magic lost it´s tender.
To save his Crystal Empire,
he went into darkness´s lair.
There he found a black book,
with confidence he took a look.
About dark crystals the book spoke,
so powerful to make true any hope.
The magic had to be awoken,
unfortunately it had mind it´s own.
With all he had left,
he took the last breath.
Sombra ripped out his crystal heart,
I can only imagine how it was hard.
Even when he failed,
king wanted to aid.
With shiny Crystal Heart in sight,
crystal ponies will be able to fight.
Today, clean from blood,
it gets strangely hot.
It´s former wielder is here,
pure crystal´s destiny is near.
my skills I had to lend.
From deep ice he came back,
the power, I alone lack.
I am counting on my student,
let´s hope, it isn´t too sudden.
His power became great,
and caused our love to fade.
Together we fought,
and together we hoped.
Pure crystal and sun´s flames,
things, which evil hates.
I became princess and he king,
his subjects, he was loving.
With changelings came danger,
his magic lost it´s tender.
To save his Crystal Empire,
he went into darkness´s lair.
There he found a black book,
with confidence he took a look.
About dark crystals the book spoke,
so powerful to make true any hope.
The magic had to be awoken,
unfortunately it had mind it´s own.
With all he had left,
he took the last breath.
Sombra ripped out his crystal heart,
I can only imagine how it was hard.
Even when he failed,
king wanted to aid.
With shiny Crystal Heart in sight,
crystal ponies will be able to fight.
Today, clean from blood,
it gets strangely hot.
It´s former wielder is here,
pure crystal´s destiny is near.
Wrath
Here, in sticky blood I stand,
on this Celestia forsaken land.
It used to be friendly and warm,
until you came to bring harm.
My soul is empty,
revenge sounds tasty.
I still have friends?
Then here my loyalty ends.
You can try to hide,
I will give you time.
Then the hunt begins,
game too dark for fillies.
My vision is blured and red,
my hooves grasps your neck.
You will feel my wrath,
ending with your last breath.
I feel so much better,
when you are gone forever.
What will happen now?
My rage goes quickly down.
I had friends before,
but I left them alone.
I don´t have anywhere to go,
but tears will not flow.
No more I need their aid,
my darkness will never fade.
I can be alone now,
and live in world of my own.
on this Celestia forsaken land.
It used to be friendly and warm,
until you came to bring harm.
My soul is empty,
revenge sounds tasty.
I still have friends?
Then here my loyalty ends.
You can try to hide,
I will give you time.
Then the hunt begins,
game too dark for fillies.
My vision is blured and red,
my hooves grasps your neck.
You will feel my wrath,
ending with your last breath.
I feel so much better,
when you are gone forever.
What will happen now?
My rage goes quickly down.
I had friends before,
but I left them alone.
I don´t have anywhere to go,
but tears will not flow.
No more I need their aid,
my darkness will never fade.
I can be alone now,
and live in world of my own.
Night
My sister abandoned me,
so ponies could the sun see.
She ends my beatiful night,
with her heart so light.
I will not let it die,
moon is like my eye.
We´ve been though a lot,
and now I will make a dot.
I don´t care how,
moon, I will not low!
My strengh will be darkness,
you will be simply powerless.
Shadows will cover the flame,
behind our sisterhood draw a line.
Though you are blinded, sister,
don´t expect any tender.
The eclipse is starting,
creating a beatiful ring.
I can feel the power,
from Celestia being lower.
Why does my heart hurt?
Evil came to lurk.
The night will be eternal,
it sure will not bring any harm.
I am Nightmare Moon,
now I will rule!
Celestia, I wish you knew,
how much do I hate you.
You caused me so much pain,
you should be named Cain.
I am crying tears of gloom,
nopony can see them on the moon.
so ponies could the sun see.
She ends my beatiful night,
with her heart so light.
I will not let it die,
moon is like my eye.
We´ve been though a lot,
and now I will make a dot.
I don´t care how,
moon, I will not low!
My strengh will be darkness,
you will be simply powerless.
Shadows will cover the flame,
behind our sisterhood draw a line.
Though you are blinded, sister,
don´t expect any tender.
The eclipse is starting,
creating a beatiful ring.
I can feel the power,
from Celestia being lower.
Why does my heart hurt?
Evil came to lurk.
The night will be eternal,
it sure will not bring any harm.
I am Nightmare Moon,
now I will rule!
Celestia, I wish you knew,
how much do I hate you.
You caused me so much pain,
you should be named Cain.
I am crying tears of gloom,
nopony can see them on the moon.
Eyes
Tato básnička je v podstatě backstory mýho OC, při čemž on je zde brony a ne poník.
Nopony is looking,
feelings are black as ink.
My eyes scares them,
likes snakes in a den.
Magic in my eyes,
makes fears rise.
Still, I´ve never used it,
though hearts, I could´ve lift.
Happiness awaits too,
my magic´s tool.
They are scared,
of that dream´s end.
I am leaving forever,
we will not be together.
Your hatred is strong
and I can´t prove you wrong.
Then I saw that mare,
orange flame burns air.
She is not scared,
like that one herd.
She was standing near,
on ground dropped a tear.
It felt like a year,
she was just a dream.
My eyes are wet,
only despair left.
Embraced by horrors,
my green eyes glows.
I will not die!
There still is time.
I will find the realm,
where dreams are real.
feelings are black as ink.
My eyes scares them,
likes snakes in a den.
Magic in my eyes,
makes fears rise.
Still, I´ve never used it,
though hearts, I could´ve lift.
Happiness awaits too,
my magic´s tool.
They are scared,
of that dream´s end.
I am leaving forever,
we will not be together.
Your hatred is strong
and I can´t prove you wrong.
Then I saw that mare,
orange flame burns air.
She is not scared,
like that one herd.
She was standing near,
on ground dropped a tear.
It felt like a year,
she was just a dream.
My eyes are wet,
only despair left.
Embraced by horrors,
my green eyes glows.
I will not die!
There still is time.
I will find the realm,
where dreams are real.
Forest (upraveno)
I need to run away,
faster then my ally.
Escape into forest,
unknown to bravest.
My heart is scared,
fight fate I dared.
I am a coward,
not going forward.
Others are my fear,
to me, they were near.
Shackles are emotions,
as cold as it sounds.
I hear clapping of hooves,
hitting cold stones.
These ponies made sparkle,
my forest sets on fire.
Ice in my chest,
why did it melt?
Sun shine fights through trees,
out of my eyes, flow tears.
No more I need dark forests,
they burned them into ashes.
Here is where my fear ends,
because they are my friends.
faster then my ally.
Escape into forest,
unknown to bravest.
My heart is scared,
fight fate I dared.
I am a coward,
not going forward.
Others are my fear,
to me, they were near.
Shackles are emotions,
as cold as it sounds.
I hear clapping of hooves,
hitting cold stones.
These ponies made sparkle,
my forest sets on fire.
Ice in my chest,
why did it melt?
Sun shine fights through trees,
out of my eyes, flow tears.
No more I need dark forests,
they burned them into ashes.
Here is where my fear ends,
because they are my friends.
Speed
Cold is all I can feel,
on your chest I have ear.
Life runned away,
and bitter is honey.
My rainbow mane and name,
symbols of speed they once were.
Tears are dropping on your face,
then they continue on chest to dance.
Your eyes looking into nowhere,
make my face, like snow, pale.
Deep wound, crossing place on Twilight,
place, where I wanted to kiss her tonight.
Worst fear came to live,
world stopped, except time.
Next to me, is dead Sparkle,
all I can do is whisper:
I wasn´t fast enough.
on your chest I have ear.
Life runned away,
and bitter is honey.
My rainbow mane and name,
symbols of speed they once were.
Tears are dropping on your face,
then they continue on chest to dance.
Your eyes looking into nowhere,
make my face, like snow, pale.
Deep wound, crossing place on Twilight,
place, where I wanted to kiss her tonight.
Worst fear came to live,
world stopped, except time.
Next to me, is dead Sparkle,
all I can do is whisper:
I wasn´t fast enough.
U této básničky jsem se zatím ještě nesnažil mít stejný počet slabik ve verších, ale snad to příliš nevadí
Shadow´s Joy
They called me darkness,
when they weren´t fearless.
Little misunderstanding
caused great suffering.
XXXX
They called me devil,
pony of evil.
I just knew,
what does love truly do.
XXXX
Enemy in front of their eyes,
straight inside their hearts.
Hero, forgotten, banished,
face in filth covered.
XXXX
Love is hope and hatred doom,
said they, when looking at the moon.
I, imprisoned in the ice,
see an honest dice.
XXXX
Dice, the child of fate.
I wish they felt,
the freedom, the joy
of being alone.
when they weren´t fearless.
Little misunderstanding
caused great suffering.
XXXX
They called me devil,
pony of evil.
I just knew,
what does love truly do.
XXXX
Enemy in front of their eyes,
straight inside their hearts.
Hero, forgotten, banished,
face in filth covered.
XXXX
Love is hope and hatred doom,
said they, when looking at the moon.
I, imprisoned in the ice,
see an honest dice.
XXXX
Dice, the child of fate.
I wish they felt,
the freedom, the joy
of being alone.
Twilight and Sombra
It´s hard to have friends,
always scared of fiends.
I´ve never thought of love,
until it appeared, like a dove.
His heart was black,
in my sense he made a crack.
His power, filled with shadows,
broke in my soul all windows.
He is for me like a midnight,
and I for him am Twilight.
His name is Sombra,
evil as his penumbra.
I remember nightmare,
back in the Crystal Empire.
It was his magic,
so cold and poetic.
Everything has to end,
love, killed like an ant.
Another mare came between us,
without a care for our lust.
With grey, shined her mane,
Death was her cursed name.
always scared of fiends.
I´ve never thought of love,
until it appeared, like a dove.
His heart was black,
in my sense he made a crack.
His power, filled with shadows,
broke in my soul all windows.
He is for me like a midnight,
and I for him am Twilight.
His name is Sombra,
evil as his penumbra.
I remember nightmare,
back in the Crystal Empire.
It was his magic,
so cold and poetic.
Everything has to end,
love, killed like an ant.
Another mare came between us,
without a care for our lust.
With grey, shined her mane,
Death was her cursed name.
Chrysalis´s Fall
We are back home,
even though, we aren´t alone,
we still failed.
No power gained.
It is all my fault,
the strenght, for what we hoped,
was taken away,
and no help is on the way.
I am queen of changelings,
we feast upon the feelings.
Love is what we devour,
but today we have only mourn.
Shining Armor and Princess Cadence,
their magic comes out of romance.
A prey turned into hunter
and now we have to hunger.
My subjects are hopeless.
I have to act fearless.
Our enemies are expecting daughter,
after my wrath, there will be no laughter.
even though, we aren´t alone,
we still failed.
No power gained.
It is all my fault,
the strenght, for what we hoped,
was taken away,
and no help is on the way.
I am queen of changelings,
we feast upon the feelings.
Love is what we devour,
but today we have only mourn.
Shining Armor and Princess Cadence,
their magic comes out of romance.
A prey turned into hunter
and now we have to hunger.
My subjects are hopeless.
I have to act fearless.
Our enemies are expecting daughter,
after my wrath, there will be no laughter.
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